As a mist gathers
on the ocean
the sun warms
you blush.
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Loved it. I could merge myself in the nature's scenario. Thanks for sharing.
illusion is connected with nature. sometimes illusions are scary as the storm..sometimes it is pleasant.. Nice to read..
Very nice. A tide sweeps in/ hitting the shore/ your face in the waves. - Takes me back to a childhood moment.
Observations from nature's swings on wings of imagination. Beautifully described. Thank you.
lovely.... i can interpret the poem in any way and on anything......as i wish..this is real poetry love it
Like the lilting strains of a melody, like the cool touch of a passing breeze, this small poem refreshes and enlivens!