***...An Idyllic Love....*** Comments

i fancy you pulsating in my heart actually your poem pulsates with want and love.....for the beloved and is very romantic its a very very nice poem...beautifully written cheers and ten

what feelings i can convey about your this great emotional poem? there is a pain and love vowen into words expressing itself.great1

an excellent write deep composition ma'am....a thirst, wanting, needing, having then loosing....amazing 10+++ ' kuch he kuch mein sub kuch chala gaya pheley tum chaley gaye phir dum chala gaya' - aijaz

You write well Wardha, but try keep the flow..... and should you be able to do so, your poems would be marvelous

Very good. But you could have made it more poetic and soothing.

woooo lovely! desparately emitting love! ..........10

Why fancy every thing? Why not try them whether they are real are not? Poem is thoroughly enjoyable. A good reading ride.

a cry on fancied love, in desertion though, from the village behind hills to reach the village behind the stars...melodious...good piece with excellent rhyming, Wardha...10

Beautiful conflicting feelings and very deep insight.Great rhyme-love the ending.a ten from me.

Very poetic. Try to be more poetic. I like your style.

Excellent and very romantic.A 10 for you.

very very nice..........

This giant expression has inspired a very humble modest offering 'Reflection' thanks Wardha

....sometimes a broken heart needs denial to heal... great to fancy a loving piece.