Thursday, February 12, 2009

An Idyllic Idiosyncrasy Comments

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With a finger to her lips she signaled to be silent.
A tacit statement synonymous to a secret love.
Only with eyes she spoke to abate my concerns.
Virtuous fidelity to be lauded and admired.
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Benjamin Feliciano
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Michael Gale 23 February 2009

Thank you on the compliment of my Mir-Maid, poem!

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Michael Gale 23 February 2009

Hey! I just realised, you live where, near, i was stationed @ Camp Pendleton, Ca., San Onofre, as a Marine. Nice weather, out there! Just a wee bit chilly, in the mornings and nights. Have a nice day! God bless all poets-MJG.

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Michael Gale 23 February 2009

Yes-Women of conscience are a rare breed. As are morals, in us all. Great poem! God bless us all-MJG.

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