An Idyll Comments

Simply superb imagination as also the song. Congrats on it's modern poem of the Day.

Love the pastoral nature of the piece, its very mid period romantic, in its imagery and themes, it seems that the scene is one of quite reflection for a period of life and a person that is gone. Still Susan Williams has a point the writer is more fascinated with the context of youth and the allure of fresh vitality, then again we have forever to be old and only a brief moment to be young,

It seemed most of her beauty lay in her youth- -her appeal was her freshness and her trust

Quite romantic. Object of admiration rather than love. Hope inspired by beautiful form.

one who is smitten by beauty's young allure.

With your beauty. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A wonderful love poem where you have raised her to the highest altar of beauty. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely poem with a captivating narrative and language which make everything adorable. Thanks. And we went down together by paths your childhood knew, Remote you went beside me like the spirit of the dew,

Thanks for sharing+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++