Sunday, October 20, 2019

An Ideal Principal Comments

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An illuminating torch bearer will always be in the limelight
In the frying pan he will be tossed in and out alright
His words weighed with mixed emotions
No doubt it may lead to personal aversions....
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Jaishree Nair
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Bri Edwards 22 December 2019

Why add last stanza? ? In U.S. i doubt there are such powerful principals. what about teachers, parents, etc.? to MyPoemList, i guess. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 22 December 2019

stanza 1, line 3: i'd use " emotions" at end stanza 3, line 1: " mission" stanza 4, line 3: i say " appal/appall" is a verb, not a noun " appeal" ? ? " presence of mind" phrase: " the ability to remain calm and take quick, sensible action" stanza 6, line 4: i think you 'want' the noun " ascent" , not verb " ascends" stanza 7, line 2: " futures"

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James Mclain 20 October 2019

What a beautiful poem of hope joy and love. Jaishree.

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