An illuminating torch bearer will always be in the limelight
In the frying pan he will be tossed in and out alright
His words weighed with mixed emotions
No doubt it may lead to personal aversions....
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stanza 1, line 3: i'd use " emotions" at end stanza 3, line 1: " mission" stanza 4, line 3: i say " appal/appall" is a verb, not a noun " appeal" ? ? " presence of mind" phrase: " the ability to remain calm and take quick, sensible action" stanza 6, line 4: i think you 'want' the noun " ascent" , not verb " ascends" stanza 7, line 2: " futures"
Why add last stanza? ? In U.S. i doubt there are such powerful principals. what about teachers, parents, etc.? to MyPoemList, i guess. bri :)