Tuesday, June 10, 2008

An Ice Revelation Comments

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Cold as ice you snuck away;
I wondered what you really felt,
And waited through the altered days,
To see if one day you would melt.
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Stephanie King
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Flora Gillingham 17 June 2008

Very enjoyable poem. I like the rhymes - not forced. fx

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Frank Cannon 11 June 2008

Cleverly constructed piece.

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Harish K. Thakur 10 June 2008

outstanding meshing in of the personal with the natural. Really great.piece..

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Stephanie King

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