Unassuming, humble and colorless,
with perfect corners and smooth edges,
transparent and with glistening faces,
an ice cube welcomes light rays gleefully.
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Good refreshment. Normally few poets only go to unexplored arenas and bring out the content. This poet dares to venture such fields. This mindset makes all the difference. All the Best.
A Ice cube made an object of Art by magnificent Imagery of the poet! The poem is precise and simple animating the icecube. I rate 9/10. Thanks.
I like it when a scientist gets poetic. Even a cube of ice has so many meanings and uses very nicely expressed and pleasant for the reader. Go on like this
Leave it out in the sunshine and see it vanish joyfully. Those last two words vanish joyfully have lot to say
you are so good. You can write about just anything. And the imaginery part is simple superb! . All the more well penned!