Sunday, May 13, 2007

An Hour Comments

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It was about an hour,
When I realized
How pale got my flower..
And my life is compromised
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Mousheera Shafik
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Hosny Soliman 29 September 2011

Very expressive words, it's so short but can has all the story from one hour to one year. I enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing.

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Ayesha Sartawi 05 January 2008

simplism adds special flavour to the poem I enjoyed it

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Jack Tex 22 August 2007

This poem of yours is absolutely wonderful. It is short but right to the point. Thanks for sharing. Best Regards Mohammad

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