Monday, January 11, 2010

An Hour Late Comments

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An hour late
And the option
To continue waiting
Remains,
...
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Dennis Go
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Fay Slimm 11 January 2010

This has a close terse feel Dennis and written from the state of a 'tired man' the piece highlights 'waiting' as nevertheless bringing it's own choice of - - - for'how long'. An intimate verse which stays within the reader's mind...10 from Fay.

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