.. An Eye For Eye.... Comments

great write. both sadness and vengence in equal balance put together superbly by an excellent poet. it holds much truth in it for so many injustices done to others. i love it! again my friend a wonderful work of true emotion and art.! 10's all of the way. Jen

I absolutely love this poem, it has strong feeling. I love how you wrote it with so much emotion<33

Eye for an eye yes what a vengeful wrath a thing that can tear nothing but the heart

If only i can say this to the people who shade my sky with gray... 10 Eyan...

Seems to be its pay back time my dear friend............well done with great rhymes and touching moving monologues! ! !

I really like this! Its relatable, creative but not so comlex and filled with illlutions that I can't understand. It has a lot of emotion in it but you managed to keep it balanced =)

The poem is pregnant with angry emotions; but well composed and to the point. I like expressing anger in words and on paper; it is therapeutic and if controlled it can produce a good poem. On a minor point, please correct some spelling mistakes: split for splited; whiles for while; An Eye for An Eye! ! ! ! for! ! ! ! an eye for Eye. Thank you for inviting me to read this poem.

Give me back..... why? I ask. If you gave it, then let it stay that way, with whomsoever received it and have the joy that there was something worth giving in you that another has received. Ronald's comments below are helpful. I'll go and read him.

revenge is the starngest form of self harm. Why is it so important that we feel we should pay someone back for a precieved harm they have done us instead of being grateful for the lesson they've given us.

loved it, was short. but DEFINETLY took me more than 12 seconds! ! ! ! ! ! lolz. really liked it, expressionful and i can understand how ur feeling right now.

I love this one. ive been writing for about 2 or 3 yrs but never thought anyone cared about how i felt so i never showed it

I love the way you expressed the anger within, after all it's in the human nature and that's what makes the poem nice cos it seems to me so natural. keep the good work!

you all ready know what i'm going to say...will eyan great poem..and its true the enemy will try to steal your happiness...and god will return it twice as much what you had..love how you express your self in diffrenet ways good job..

The man! ! this is also nice piece love the rhytm well done poet luwi

YOU EXPRESS AN UNIVERSAL TRUTH OF NATURAL LAW TODAY YOU ARE STRONG YOU DO EVERYTHING TOMORROW YOU HAVE TO PAY BACK YOUR WRONGDOINGS ULTIMATELY JUNGLE LAW GIVES NOTHING ONLY BLOOD--- FULL OF BLOOD NICELY WRITTEN.I GIVE YOU10/10

YOur poem shows your anger, that's what i can get from it. This is life. Sometimes, things doesnt happen as we expected, but those things should lead people to be a wiser man. Thats the lesson in life. Many obstacles that one may find in this life. life is full of exam and lesson. A thing happens for a reason. One may find it in an implicit message. Meaningful way you express it and beautiful. Good work! ! !

An eye for an eye leaves nothing but blindness, we can have our hearts ripped out, and we want payback on the person doing that to us, what we often forget is that most of the time we are not always innocent, if we wait and let the dust settle the anger leaves us, and hopefully the pain softens and we remember better times. we write to express feeling, it helps us come to terms with a particular situation, you sum up your pain perfectly.

The Bible let us know that when the enemy steals anything from us he has to repay and sometimes double pay back, so when we are seeking God, for His advice letting Him revenge for us instead of we ourselves. He will make sure that we will receive what is due unto us. So stand still and hold on for God's word will not return unto Him void.

I took 15: O) In that part of the world I come from, we encourage word as an expression of the frustration o anger we feel, a redeeming solution. I hope it gives you the strength to move forward in your development as a human being, and what triggered your anger does not take your the desire to see the world around you in the first place with love love from Sweden Ewa

Dealing with anger through words is far better than anything else Eyan and your verse demonstrates that in a strong but meaningful way - - - 10/10 from Fay