Monday, September 24, 2018

An Extra Mile Comments

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If I can't meet hearts with an extra mile,
The least let me try— walk half a more mile,
Let me meet half-way with inviting smile,
Let me not stand on an isolate isle.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Bharati Nayak 01 October 2018

If I can't meet hearts with an extra mile, The least let me try— walk half a more mile, Let me meet half-way with inviting smile, Let me not stand on an isolate isle.- - - - - Wow- -How beautifully you bring to us the value of that extra half mile - - - that value of bending a little more or soften our stand so that we do not lose our friends and many valuable things life.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 October 2018

Thank you Bharati Nayak, you liked the poem

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 September 2018

very beautiful thoughts i picked u up from some ones comments good ones you gave now you may read some of mine you may @77 like em

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 October 2018

Thank you, it's good know when someone likes your poem.

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