Tuesday, March 20, 2018

An Extra Glace An Additional Grace Comments

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Millions of seconds had been passing
as billions of years!
The moon had been crying in side real days
The dim light of the twinkling stars
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 31 March 2018

Moon has been the subject of umpteen poems. Here is another beautiful poem on the enchanting seductress of the night and Akhtar ji is trapped in her mesmerizing spell! !

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Ravi Kopra 21 March 2018

Thanks Dear Moon! You taught my beloved. to be manic depressive.I fear as she's getting old She might become a psychotic soon. She follows you blindly as I follow Allah. In 14 days she's my chaudweeN ka chaand and in the next 14, she's a devil's jahanum - Dark, gloomy, sad, irritable, bitchy, mad. Thank you Dear Moon, thanks a million!

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Akhtar Jawad 22 March 2018

I described my experience, you described yours, my fate is mine and yours is yours.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 March 2018

A marvelous poem that captures the beauty and wonders of the moon. Yes, the moon is an extra glace and grace of the Mother Earth. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 March 2018

we are here for a moon light play, otherwise, gardens of paradise was a beautiful place. The earth has a moon, an extra glace, an additional grace! Thanks Dear Moon! You taught my beloved to be artistic by copying the phases of your stylish love...........stunning expression. Beautiful poem on moon on a philosophical base. Thank u dear sir.

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