An Exquisite Hurt Comments

I could feel the enrgy and the frenzy in this poem. I liked this very much. You have a really awesome grasp on description.

I love the energy in this one, Uriah.

The first stanza carries the excitement...and your images are good. I love the title. Raynette

why do you place exclamation marks on everything? interesting...

Good one! I really liked the first stanza best....

oooo....I felt that one. :)