Monday, May 15, 2006

An Exploration Of Color Comments

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I noticed the color for the first time today
I've seen the teal hue of a wall
how streetlights strike a faded orange chord
in this heart of mine
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Willem VanVoorthuysen 16 May 2006

I'm amazed and deeply moved by your message and the way you presented it. I've been writing free poetry myself since I was a teenager, and I love it. Please, keep writing! Tot ziens, Willem

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Leigh Mia 16 May 2006

I like the imagery you used in this one, the details you give about nature provide the twist at tht end that isn't just some nature flower poem

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