I noticed the color for the first time today
I've seen the teal hue of a wall
how streetlights strike a faded orange chord
in this heart of mine
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I like the imagery you used in this one, the details you give about nature provide the twist at tht end that isn't just some nature flower poem
I'm amazed and deeply moved by your message and the way you presented it. I've been writing free poetry myself since I was a teenager, and I love it. Please, keep writing! Tot ziens, Willem