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I can picture each scene that you describe in this poem. Wonderfully written. Andrew x

Exquisitely crafted.

This really suits the non-rhyming treatment. Each phrase can stand on it sown and is not subjugated to the rest of the poem but there is an overriding sens eof beauty. Well done.

Dear Ernestine This write has solid foundations for it was built from a beautiful heart, I love old buildings like this, such atmosphere, they seem to still the mind somehow and you have really captured a beautiful moment, not lost but held up by your words A real treat for the eye Love Duncan X

the serenity of your words wash over me Ernestine. A beautiful tribute to a higher spirit. I hope is well with you and yours, Smiling at you, Tai