An Experience, Surreal Comments

a deep imagination! ! !

very intense....and overwhelming. a tremendous poem ma'am. hats off.

'Into a phallus of ash occupying and expanding into all the visible universe' Rachel Ann Butler

As always another wonderful imaginations with peotic excellence regards sandhya

lo, into a phallus of ash occupying and expanding into all the visible universe Your excellency, this is excellent! :) 10+

hey prof here get yer ten.. and ummmm..welll i ll be gone ;)) cheers

brilliant images.....................

This also reminds me of a a weekend spent with Shiva devotees in the 1970's I have no idea why that weekend flashed in my mind as I read this. This is full of wonderous images of India and when I read your work I become strangly homesick I say strangly because India is not my homeland. It is my obsession I think. Love always Paddy--------10

I had this vision in the Devipuram Temple(The old temple on the hillock) when my eyes first laid upon that holy Phallus Idol of Lord Shiva. Now you brought that imagery right into my inner eye. Thank you.

stunning images.. fine fine stuff.

A poem to ponder over, again and again. True srrealism........Like graphics in movies

Your bring out the surreal experience with terrific imagery Indira...You are the mistress of teh surreal. I remember reading another poem of yours written earlier on surrealism..which was equally evocative...