An Expedition Towards End Comments

Very true, in spite of all these stumbling blocks in our life, we all are allured to move ahead through all those risky path and at last some where we fall and end. So beautifully expressed. Thank you.

Wow! Such a perfect portrayal of our lives on earth! We go through so much pain and suffering throughout our lives, yet we are reluctant to give it up in hopes of finding something good in it's trials. So true, we numb ourselves somehow and continue living through it. Totally honest and realistic depiction of how we live here on earth, Amitava. Another 10 for sure! Thank you for sharing your thoughts, always enjoy reading your take on life, you have amazing insight into it. RoseAnn

Yes this is life having such a soothing or numbing effect on us yet we love to carry to the last......very beautifully composed...... Amazing piece.....10/10

Yes this is life having such a soothing or numbing effect on us yet we love to carry to the last......very beautifully composed...... Amazing piece.....10/10

Inspite of all adversities, man is zealous to continue his journey throuhg thorn strewn paths! Very few think of leaving the track half way! To me, here lies the beauty of life! A great write, Amitava!

This life is a journey Over a fire filled path. I really like these two powerful lines...so very true!

Nice poem or one must say a wisdom poem- You have to end This passage at last. thank you Amitava in my hand only 10 ah so poor I am

Licking and following it With a hope till the end. Such a narcotic Is affixed with this life! ! A great write..........10