An Excuse Comments

Nice stuff! It sort of gives a hint of how we all make excuses and procastinate.Well written!

Well, if others gave me an excuse like this, I would ask for more excuses! It may not have been the love song you intended for your mother, but if your mother were to read this, you would make her very happy indeed! I hope you found the peace you were looking for. If you didn't, may I suggest that you read this poem, and I am sure it will bring you the peace that you created in the act of looking for it!

Excellent flowing write...really enjoyed this one...thank you and I can relate to it stronly...10+++