An Excruiciating Pain Of A Exquisite Heart Comments

I love the Poet's Note......... ;) ==================== “An Excruiciating Pain Of A Exquisite Heart” check the spelling of “excruciating”. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “Fervent, fervid, fervour of fettle love, ” I like the alliteration ….f, f, f, f …………though I haven’t checked definitions for usage; I don’t know the word “fettle”. there are a lot of words I don’t “know”. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “And we compiled to be as lovely creatures, ” check the definition/usage of “compiled” here. maybe it works. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - another new word to me: “Sim•u•la•crum (sĭmˌyə-lāˈkrəm, -lăkˈrəm) ► • n. An image or representation. • n. An unreal or vague semblance.” - - - - - - - - - - - - - - at the beginning and ending of the poem, it sounds like the ‘guy and girl’ (?) are getting along well. but near the end of the poem is this: “Alas! dishy angel, Forsook*** me, like a boisterous gale, she rushed.” …………which sounds like the girl is not interested in the guy. hmmm? ***“for•sake (fôr-sākˈ, fər-) ► • v. To give up (something formerly held dear): renounce: forsook liquor. • v. To leave altogether; abandon: forsook Hollywood and returned to the legitimate stage. More at Wordnik from The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language,4th Edition “ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - overall good work for someone who probably speaks/writes another language usually and is so young.. bri :) p.s. I know you asked me to read a different poem, but I came to this one first. I’ll try to get to the other later. I’m kind of busy and have limited time online. rate: 7? i see i am in your friends list. can you tell me which of my poems, if any, you have read?

Thank you for commenting! you appreciate my poems. Ad your poems are great too.

Excellent write, with spilling romance. Thank you for sharng.x