Mist and fog are forming in the winter chill;
Chill wind blow is intensifying into storm!
With what speed what will storm do tomorrow?
Tomorrow only it will be known to all sure!
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i think i need to disect this more but it's good. You choice of words, construction, and formation of the poem is really good sir! nice write!
The big exam of GOOD & EVIL? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
in my previous comment about this one... i have mentioned that i need to disect the poem but now i understood it now! I have also rated it 10! The last two lines of the poem are very true. Truly in our life we face tests and exams and we should pass all with high scores so that our existence will be guaranteed little by little. Thanks for sharing!