Friday, December 11, 2009

An Exam For All! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mist and fog are forming in the winter chill;
Chill wind blow is intensifying into storm!
With what speed what will storm do tomorrow?
Tomorrow only it will be known to all sure!
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 December 2009

in my previous comment about this one... i have mentioned that i need to disect the poem but now i understood it now! I have also rated it 10! The last two lines of the poem are very true. Truly in our life we face tests and exams and we should pass all with high scores so that our existence will be guaranteed little by little. Thanks for sharing!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 11 December 2009

i think i need to disect this more but it's good. You choice of words, construction, and formation of the poem is really good sir! nice write!

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Joseph Poewhit 11 December 2009

The big exam of GOOD & EVIL? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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