Tuesday, June 15, 2021

An Ever-Changing Art- Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beautiful sky
Is an ever- changing art
Adorned by the clouds
Painted by the golden sun
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 21 July 2023

Amazing idea about the sky which has various hues at different times.

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Nabakishore Dash 20 June 2023

Brilliant description of ever changing sky.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

Such Amazing and awesome imagery painted here! .. With such beautiful feel! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

So very deep and true! .. Beautifully Beautifully expressed! ..

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Anjandev Roy 29 January 2022

This is simply excellent.

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Anjandev Roy 06 July 2021

Fantastic and impeccable piece...thank u.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 June 2021

I also enjoyed this poem. It took me away from my troubles

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 June 2021

I enjoyed very much this sublimest Tanka. To my Favourites A perfect presentation of Beauty. Thank you so much for sharing

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 June 2021

5 Stars full for this gorgeous Ever Changing Art (tanka-format) . The 5 lines make altogether one whole Presentation of Beauty. Keep rereading this Tanka and it will make more Beauty coming in.

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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

I too applaud the second line! ! ! !

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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

Faved and 5-starred this beauty

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 June 2021

I love the second last line Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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