Sunday, June 28, 2009

An Evening Walk Comments

Rating: 2.6

For the first time in many days
I decided to bestow myself a gift
Of long and lonely stroll in the
Neighbouring park
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Seema Aarella
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Uttam Dey 26 September 2014

Its just astounding..... I really enjoyed reading this poem

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Kannan G 24 March 2010

A simple and casual Evening Walk unravels a vivid and pleasant world of life and delight! Best wishes.

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Obinna Eruchie 05 July 2009

A delightful poem on ''...AN EVENING WALK''.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 04 July 2009

Evening walk at a pleasant atmosphere... flowers.. colours.. memories of parents... Seema your intention to hide your inner feelings is great.. at the end you said it... pretending your thoughts never came to my mind... ever? ? ? ? ? ? ... seema dear, another 10+++++ -Jaleel Perinjanam

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Reshma Ramesh 02 July 2009

such a beautiful write seems............thanks for the walk in the park.....

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a lovely picture of the park you give there...so much of life in it....10

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Saadat Tahir 28 June 2009

in a hot and hazy june mid day....you put the sprinkler on....touched the heart and tender cord...almost took me along vivid...beautiful cheers

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rago rago 28 June 2009

yu have made the park talkative...........

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Priyanka Bhowmick 28 June 2009

fine picture of a park... loved the concluding lines...

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Indira Babbellapati 28 June 2009

versification of the little park within!

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