I walked from the big house to the villas
In the cool of the late tuscan night
I smelt wheat grass and orange blossom
I heard owls and night birds
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You were 100% conscious of the nature around you on this occasion and made the best of it. Nice work. Please review my poem 'Isthmus Of Pain And Joy'
Your description of your walk is so real I felt I was on the walk with you. Well done beautifully written
A calalcade of well-embroidered sensory data. Interesting crossroads of sensibilities.MM
Purely and simply wanting to be left alone, holding conversation with those of your choice. Me, being a Pisces, it took me there. Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem several times.
You hit it on the head John. Thanks for the comment.Cheers, Geoffrey.