Thursday, July 19, 2012

An Evening Walk In Tuscany. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked from the big house to the villas
In the cool of the late tuscan night
I smelt wheat grass and orange blossom
I heard owls and night birds
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Geoffrey Fafard
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John Ahern 17 January 2017

Purely and simply wanting to be left alone, holding conversation with those of your choice. Me, being a Pisces, it took me there. Thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem several times.

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Geoffrey Fafard 17 January 2017

You hit it on the head John. Thanks for the comment.Cheers, Geoffrey.

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 28 May 2015

You were 100% conscious of the nature around you on this occasion and made the best of it. Nice work. Please review my poem 'Isthmus Of Pain And Joy'

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Noreen Carden 25 September 2014

Your description of your walk is so real I felt I was on the walk with you. Well done beautifully written

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Michael Morgan 20 July 2012

A calalcade of well-embroidered sensory data. Interesting crossroads of sensibilities.MM

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