An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
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Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++
Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!
Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work! Caroline
yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem...
Wowwwww, , this is very cool... I felt very calm when I read this one, , , Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , , I like it, , , (^_^) v Naru Kaede
a very beautiful write indeed, you sketch it very well and surely those momments are never forgetable....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
excellent poem great write, you have put beautiful scenery and beautiful emotions together, nice one
Some moments are beautiful..................to ponder.
the gimmick of love makes this poem makes a real feel turned my back to catch her greeting she sent me in her hand waving. I passed a building and so a field, a content feeling suddenly built.
Wow i can imagen this all the way through your poem it was lovely thank you for sharing.. Krista
An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy