Wednesday, December 3, 2008

An Evening Walk Comments

Rating: 3.3

An evening walk,
just after both of us talked.
I walked her home afterward,
through a breezy boulevard.
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Raj Nandy 14 January 2009

An evening walk can cover many aspects of life, you have mentioned yours and I have mentioned mine! Do read my poem 'AN EVENING WALK'! -Raj Nandy

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Aiswarya. T.anish 14 December 2008

Really Nice poem..I liked it a lot

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Compact composition.........beautiful words chosen.......great! ......10+++

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Colin Jeffery 10 December 2008

A poem that offers much

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Lovely..very passionate..the feeling of contentment..of the blooming love.. Expressive words..Great write!

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Colin Jeffery 07 December 2008

Very good poem indeed

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Caroline Weeks 06 December 2008

Like following a story...it has such a calm, settled feel, very thoughtful. Good work! Caroline

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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

yes............a walk with your girl friend takes u on top of the world............nice love poem...

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Naru Kaede 04 December 2008

Wowwwww, , this is very cool... I felt very calm when I read this one, , , Slowly follow you're story in this poem, , , I like it, , , (^_^) v Naru Kaede

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Joseph Poewhit 04 December 2008

Poem paints a nice picture

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Aijaz Asif 04 December 2008

a very beautiful write indeed, you sketch it very well and surely those momments are never forgetable....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif

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<font color =fusha>Amy 04 December 2008

excellent poem great write, you have put beautiful scenery and beautiful emotions together, nice one

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 04 December 2008

Some moments are beautiful..................to ponder.

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Kee Thampi 04 December 2008

the gimmick of love makes this poem makes a real feel turned my back to catch her greeting she sent me in her hand waving. I passed a building and so a field, a content feeling suddenly built.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 03 December 2008

beautiful...thanks for sharing

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Wow i can imagen this all the way through your poem it was lovely thank you for sharing.. Krista

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