Tuesday, May 29, 2007

An Evening Delight Comments

Rating: 4.3

A sweet serenade begins to sound
As golden flames dance with streaking blue heat
A quick sound of crackling
The smell of apple wood fills the senses
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Patricia Gale
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Meggie Gultiano 15 June 2007

A romantic poem for me. Think am going to read this every evening to delight my evening.I love this Pat!

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Graham Jones 02 June 2007

Excellent writing Patricia, your descriptive talents are second to none, you breathe life into every line.

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Lee Degnan 30 May 2007

My perfect summer evening, and wonderfully described by you... I love this one! You could almost smell and hear everything you painted here... Take care, Lee

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