The blue sky, dotted with white clouds
The sun, in its last lap of race
The slanting rays gleam in crystal glow
Their beauty to the earth they bestow
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As I stand and watch this lovely evening, I experience an inner glow of a celestial kind...I can visualise the time, place and the serene atmosphere...A wonderful poem with fascinating imagery dear madam. Critically appreciated.5 stars.
Your poem and picture, Valsa, make me see why you’d want to write about this experience. The last two lines of the fourth stanza catch my attention with “her anklets” being particularly surprising and charming to me. -Glen
Just like an oil paint on canvas The poem reflects the beauty. Fantastic
As I stand and watch this lovely evening, I experience an inner glow of a celestial kind. Elegant colors flow and fade, As the sun paints a paradise before me A walk along the side of a beautiful river is really a walk to the enchantments of naure, especially in the evening when the twilight smiles and sends the sun away, Obscuring manifold vistas near and far*****
Excellently written. Beautiful words so apt to describe the artwork of God's Hands. Five Stars! ! ! ! To my Poem List.
Another spellbinding write. A poetic gem that enables a reader to experience a magical evening brought about the interplay of colors and wonders of nature Each and every stanza of this marvelous poem expresses and paints in great detail the endless beauty of nature that holds us spellbound.
A twilight scene along a flowing a river has been so well captured! The beauty of nature has merged with the effortless eloquence of the poem, a mark of the versatile poet's creative ability. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' on any day soon!
In the evening time how the sky is dotted with white clouds, elegant colors flow and fade, and the sun paints a paradise before us have been so mesmerizingly inscribed. The smiling of twilight at the time of sunset is much thrilling. A beautiful poem on evening and riverside is amazingly shared. Full stars.
it's just a poetic evening by the riverside where poetic mind and pen has merged in one and expressed stupendously the inner symphony of nature and natural heart; great poem shared; I enjoyed really
GREAT LINES! A MASTERFUL WORK OF ART. Thanks for this wonderful contribution to the world of poetry. Remain blessed, Prof.
An awesome depiction of the pristine significance of nature, with powerful images of beauty and an overall aura of serenity. Your use of language is absolutely amazing, and I always feel inspired by your works.
The mesmerizing scenery presented by the nature on an eve along-with a riverside has been marvelously captured in this beautiful life song. Thanks for sharing a 5 star melody.
A well executed poem...... Truly fabulous and marvelous........5 stars *****
nice picture also