Wednesday, December 2, 2020

An Evening By The Riverside Comments

Rating: 5.0

The blue sky, dotted with white clouds
The sun, in its last lap of race
The slanting rays gleam in crystal glow
Their beauty to the earth they bestow
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Valsa George
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me poet yeps poet 01 June 2021

nice picture also

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2020

As I stand and watch this lovely evening, I experience an inner glow of a celestial kind...I can visualise the time, place and the serene atmosphere...A wonderful poem with fascinating imagery dear madam. Critically appreciated.5 stars.

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David Wood 29 December 2020

A lovely poem I thought I was there, a good 5*

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2020

Your poem and picture, Valsa, make me see why you’d want to write about this experience. The last two lines of the fourth stanza catch my attention with “her anklets” being particularly surprising and charming to me. -Glen

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 December 2020

Just like an oil paint on canvas The poem reflects the beauty. Fantastic

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As I stand and watch this lovely evening, I experience an inner glow of a celestial kind. Elegant colors flow and fade, As the sun paints a paradise before me A walk along the side of a beautiful river is really a walk to the enchantments of naure, especially in the evening when the twilight smiles and sends the sun away, Obscuring manifold vistas near and far*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2020

Excellently written. Beautiful words so apt to describe the artwork of God's Hands. Five Stars! ! ! ! To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2020

Another spellbinding write. A poetic gem that enables a reader to experience a magical evening brought about the interplay of colors and wonders of nature Each and every stanza of this marvelous poem expresses and paints in great detail the endless beauty of nature that holds us spellbound.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 December 2020

A twilight scene along a flowing a river has been so well captured! The beauty of nature has merged with the effortless eloquence of the poem, a mark of the versatile poet's creative ability. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' on any day soon!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2020

In the evening time how the sky is dotted with white clouds, elegant colors flow and fade, and the sun paints a paradise before us have been so mesmerizingly inscribed. The smiling of twilight at the time of sunset is much thrilling. A beautiful poem on evening and riverside is amazingly shared. Full stars.

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Kostas Lagos 03 December 2020

Such a lovely poem Valsa! Thanks for posting!

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2020

it's just a poetic evening by the riverside where poetic mind and pen has merged in one and expressed stupendously the inner symphony of nature and natural heart; great poem shared; I enjoyed really

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Chinedu Dike 03 December 2020

GREAT LINES! A MASTERFUL WORK OF ART. Thanks for this wonderful contribution to the world of poetry. Remain blessed, Prof.

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Chinedu Dike 03 December 2020

An awesome depiction of the pristine significance of nature, with powerful images of beauty and an overall aura of serenity. Your use of language is absolutely amazing, and I always feel inspired by your works.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 December 2020

The mesmerizing scenery presented by the nature on an eve along-with a riverside has been marvelously captured in this beautiful life song. Thanks for sharing a 5 star melody.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 December 2020

A well executed poem...... Truly fabulous and marvelous........5 stars *****

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