Tuesday, June 17, 2008

An Evening... Comments

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Blushing red roses grin at me like shy tribal girls,
smothering me with their sweet intoxicating fragrance
While I gaze at the voluptuous curves
of the virgin-white clouds
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Bharat Trivedi
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, aryaindia 04 August 2008

Not exactly, but somewhere close, a lot of alliteration and metaphorical presentation that induces an ephemeral skimming of the surface of deeper suffering within. Excellent write. thanks, arya. God bless you.

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Aparna Kiran Mirajkar 24 June 2008

nice description, good usage of metaphor..

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