Friday, December 7, 2012

An Eternity Left To Go Comments

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On sullen ground, bleak and cold
My sentence, forever, with an eternity left to go
Having fallen from the sky, so high
Now earthbound, alone and unable to fly
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Eric Paeplow
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Howard Johnson 07 December 2012

Excellent penning, thanks for sharing

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Jt Kaniarz 07 December 2012

Good rhyming scheme very basic details good choice of words. Very meaningfull and allows the reader to visuallize and immagine what is all being said and being able to grasp what is written

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