Monday, February 1, 2010

An Eternal War For Survival! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught between mosquitoes and ants life goes on
Like the ship tossed on the waves of ocean long!
Both ups and downs of life have their own tasks
To be negotiated with appropriate measures ever!
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Ramesh T A
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Indira Renganathan 01 February 2010

A wonderful poem on the painful boredom the insectarium stings us with...with excellent flavour of words....brilliant....thank you

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Indira Renganathan 01 February 2010

A wonderful poem on the painful boredom the insectarium stings us with...with excellent flavour of words....brilliant....thank you

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Sandra Martyres 01 February 2010

An excellent write Ramesh..with brilliant opening lines..10+++ Sorry I am unable to rate poems now...another PH problem

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Ian Bowen 01 February 2010

Ramesh, thought your second stanza was brilliant. A well thought out piece of writting.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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