Thursday, October 27, 2016

An Eternal Tune Comments

Rating: 5.0

We breathe in the County Laois air,
As we walk down the long avenue without a care,
Two best friends side by side,
Remembering our humble lairs,
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Hazel Durham
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Yiyan Han 21 January 2018

Such a heartfelt piece I could sense Before reading your notes Friendship of friends and relatives Are what we care for......excellent 10!

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Dimitrios Galanis 19 November 2016

So beautifuly penned the touching memories.A tribute with a piece of art is so emotional!

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Kim Barney 15 November 2016

I have read and commented on this poem before, but I enjoyed it so much I had to come back and read it again. It is truly a wonderful poem.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 06 November 2016

A poem of eternal tune mixed with tune of heart to remember the near and dear ones.It depicts that essence of friendship Hazel Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Sekharan Pookkat 05 November 2016

remember our wonderful friends those who come to break silence in dreams and sighs broke out from our heart emptying golden days of childhood

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Johnmark O Okechukwu 31 October 2016

This is really heart touching...life ain't just a fun

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Mihaela Pirjol 30 October 2016

A heart-warming poem, imbued with nostalgia, and memories of past-time dearly treasured; though gone, never forgotten. This is a wonderfully written poem, and a great tribute to the loved ones.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 30 October 2016

An excellent write my dear poetess...10

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Rajesh Thankappan 29 October 2016

This is a breathtaking poem offering a kaleidoscopic view of your nostalgic past along with the warmth that it diffuses even today.

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Valsa George 29 October 2016

Certain places invoke sweet memories in us and we wonder if we can ever go back to those days of hearty laughter and careless fun! I can very well relate to this poem....! Those two friends who left this world prematurely leave in your heart painful memories! As you walk along with your friend now, you imagine those departed friends to be angels, dancing in the glow of stars and the moon! I enjoyed reading the poem, especially the closing stanza!

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Susan Williams 28 October 2016

So well-written! I could have been walking amid you and your friends, tasting the air of your country, joking and laughing with everyone... sounds similar to my own youth except we did rodeos and playdays. Those were the days, weren't they? I'm glad you shared them with us, shared them with us, such things enrich our lives. 10

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Mizzy ........ 28 October 2016

Treasured memories lie deep in the hearts core Rachel.... To dedicate a poem to your friends is the ultimate respect You can show them. Past happiness and sadness are tangible in this beautiful poem. Great piece of work! !

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Kim Barney 27 October 2016

This is a beautiful, nostalgic poem. Wonderfully written, Hazel. Congratulations on doing such a beautiful job. I expect it to be Poem of the Day sometime in the future!

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