We breathe in the County Laois air,
As we walk down the long avenue without a care,
Two best friends side by side,
Remembering our humble lairs,
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So beautifuly penned the touching memories.A tribute with a piece of art is so emotional!
I have read and commented on this poem before, but I enjoyed it so much I had to come back and read it again. It is truly a wonderful poem.
A poem of eternal tune mixed with tune of heart to remember the near and dear ones.It depicts that essence of friendship Hazel Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
remember our wonderful friends those who come to break silence in dreams and sighs broke out from our heart emptying golden days of childhood
This is really heart touching...life ain't just a fun
A heart-warming poem, imbued with nostalgia, and memories of past-time dearly treasured; though gone, never forgotten. This is a wonderfully written poem, and a great tribute to the loved ones.
This is a breathtaking poem offering a kaleidoscopic view of your nostalgic past along with the warmth that it diffuses even today.
Certain places invoke sweet memories in us and we wonder if we can ever go back to those days of hearty laughter and careless fun! I can very well relate to this poem....! Those two friends who left this world prematurely leave in your heart painful memories! As you walk along with your friend now, you imagine those departed friends to be angels, dancing in the glow of stars and the moon! I enjoyed reading the poem, especially the closing stanza!
So well-written! I could have been walking amid you and your friends, tasting the air of your country, joking and laughing with everyone... sounds similar to my own youth except we did rodeos and playdays. Those were the days, weren't they? I'm glad you shared them with us, shared them with us, such things enrich our lives. 10
Treasured memories lie deep in the hearts core Rachel.... To dedicate a poem to your friends is the ultimate respect You can show them. Past happiness and sadness are tangible in this beautiful poem. Great piece of work! !
This is a beautiful, nostalgic poem. Wonderfully written, Hazel. Congratulations on doing such a beautiful job. I expect it to be Poem of the Day sometime in the future!
Such a heartfelt piece I could sense Before reading your notes Friendship of friends and relatives Are what we care for......excellent 10!