Friday, September 14, 2007

An Eternal Love Comments

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Open your bright eyes,
Flower of my dreams!

The solitary marble bench,
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Elmer Romulo Valdez
flower weakness
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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

Yes, Elmer. Another lovely piece with a pleasing structure. You have a great 'feel' for poetry and that's something (like having good pitch) that cannot be 'taught'. I like the images you use in the second stanza. Love poems need more than protestations of love. I look forward to reading more of your work. love, Allie xxxx

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Elmer Romulo Valdez

Elmer Romulo Valdez

Luna, La Union, Philippines
Elmer Romulo Valdez
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Luna, La Union, Philippines
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