Sunday, May 6, 2007

An Escape Of A Lonely Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walls are narrowing as I step forth
Delivered falseness in the conceit of truth
Never must I journey to what’s not merely worth
And may I pass by as a member of the youth
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this is now 1/3 poems in my fave.... i love it, the choice of words, the flow..... it's all just brilliant... thanks for sharing!

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Sandra Fowler 06 May 2007

I feel the tears behind these lines and stanzas. A very poignant write. Take care. As always, Sandra

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