Monday, January 30, 2006

An Epitaph To A Broken Heart. Comments

Rating: 4.6

Take heed a tortured heart to heal
Scarred and bruised like orange peel
Worn, now empty cast aside
Like so much flotsam on the tide
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Graham Jones
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Scarlett Treat 06 February 2006

Pain hurts, doesen't it?

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Linda Ori 01 February 2006

Graham - How well I understand, and how well you put it into words......Love it! Linda

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Bridgid Patrick 30 January 2006

beautiful poem, .. keep up the good work. x

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Ernestine Northover 30 January 2006

Another lovely flowing poem, a lovely read as well. I loved it very much. Love Ernestine XXX Just thought I would mention that 'epitath' needs to be corrected to 'epitaph'. You can eidt it on the edit your poems page. Hope you don't mind me mentioning this. Love E.

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Mary Nagy 30 January 2006

I liked this very much Graham....I think you've described this feeling that most of us have experienced beautifully. Sincerely, Mary

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Solomon Brook 30 January 2006

Very nicely done. The sequence was tight with well arranged descriptions of emotion. Be encouraged to continue sharing. Thanks.

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