An Epitaph Comments

glad to go through your precious piece/hope to read more

Very unique my friend.

When we´ve forgotten how to laugh, it is time to retreat and reflect our situation. Very good!

dear mamtaji, we are all living tombs..... where to run away and lead a peaceful life?

A true story of one and all of us How many of us... How many times... Would have written our own... Epitaph 'Brief literary piece commemorating... A dead piece of life' But we are all like that of - Phoenix Lifes.. great gift.... To rise renewed from the ashes. NOW AND AGAIN.

wonderful narrative poem, thank you for sharing.....10

The last stanza is brilliant Mamta....you give the reader real food for thought...10+++

R E F L E C T I V E! ! ! ---> ...............AMMMmmmmmazing rhyme and rhythm! ..........................beautiful signfiers catched the signifieds .....................................touched the reader the glowing wording! ..................................................ALLTOGETHERWOWWOWWOW! 10000000+

the concluding lines says a lot mam...a lovely casual poem...10

masterful.... mamta ji u pick up the mundane...views out a whizzing train....embelish with hina...gota kinaree(URDU) and make em special beyond recognotion very well written pleased and wiser... cheers and ten

She took a long breath and said, must admit Was losing my sense of humour, bit by bit. Would you believe, had written my own epitaph: 'Here lies one, who sought to make the world laugh.' --------- Great beautiful composition dear.................rhymes and rhythm well placed....10/10

The concluding lines, mamta, give new dimensions to your poem and add an unmeasurable value to it.....thanks for sharing.....