Soaked in the scent of carnal darkness
Faint streaked crescent moon lingers
Seductively on its celestial couch,
Amid the hymn of nature
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beautiful...absolutely beautiful...this 'making love' poem was not at all physical...it had an element of love all through....10
the beauty and sensuality of the 'episode' very indulgently poeticised..you have diction for every nuance of feminine emotion, , deep.dark, riddlic, mysterious, sensuous[saw for the fst time]coyness, shy, obvious n hidden, , , , , but i never honestly thought you will compose such poem which has shades of kamala das, , , , bold and beautiful... u have an inexhaustible repertories of emotion and diction...thanx