An Epilogue To A Girl Comments

...............wow........................

so many things i felt while reading this... not goodness nor bad...but a wealth of power...that the girl must hold... when you read others do you interpret it based on your own experiences? i feel like the girl is me as i am the girl..

Made me sigh at the end, thinking of goodness. Wonderful poem, Sulaiman X's and O's

This one really impressed me Sulaimon. You wrote with a skill that said you had done this before. There were no stumbles along the way. This was very hard to do, and i recognize it as such. A wonderful job on a difficult task. GW62

Sulaiman, I did enjoy this one - The vastness of horizon... will penetrate the ozone of... eternity... was some nice imagery. Good job!

quite good, I very much enjoyed that one (my favorite of yours i guess)

An amazily written love poem. Beutiful in many ways.

THIS IS A JOY TO READ! THANKS FOR SHARING!

This is beautifu........... Well done!

Your poem is awash with metaphor and originality. I think you are contrasting the 'world lived in movies' with the vast horizon of universality. Your subject with the 'hollow heart' is perhaps capable of redemption 'your sacred heart' - or so it seems to me. You have a great feel for language Salaiman and a passionate, fertile poetic mind. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥