Thursday, June 4, 2009

An Enigma Comments

Rating: 5.0

You distrust everything I say to you
None of my sincere words reaches your heart
You see my lips move, but you hear nothing of what I have to say
My attempts to reach you, fall into deaf ears
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June FeirCruz
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Angelic Warrior 05 September 2009

brilliant......funny how that always seems to be.....the man never seems to listen to what you have to say...but you love them anyways.....great piece! 10++

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Les Derbyshire 04 September 2009

Feeling the way around a new relationship, tentative, doubtful and yet compelled by some invisible force. Will she or won't she?

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Smiley Hooker 04 June 2009

Why do people fall in love so blindly sometimes? It's good to have poetry to the rescue...your readers can feel your passion. And listen to you. Very touching write, sir.: -)

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