Thursday, November 20, 2014

An Endnote And Love Song: Comments

Rating: 4.8

1. And if you were to leave me for my faults
2. I'd not defend my lameness, walking halt
3. and from my trust I would elide your
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Erin Mouré
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Bharati Nayak 20 February 2022

A very heartfelt poem.A relationship may break, but can never vanish.There were reasons for loving and there are reasons for breaking.But a break hurts and your words nicely articulate your pain.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 September 2016

Outstanding write displaying reverence for the broken relationship and estranged lover. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rajnish Manga 03 September 2016

will not let my tongue evoke your name. You gone, I could not love me more than you and if you love me not at all I love me even less..... / Nicely articulated. Even a separation in a relationship has been respected.... with dignity for both- the lover and the beloved. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

I agree with your comments Rajnishji...Superb.

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Mizzy ........ 03 September 2016

Feelings built on lost love.....well written.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 September 2016

It will not touch my mouth. Thanks for sharing.

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