1. And if you were to leave me for my faults
2. I'd not defend my lameness, walking halt
3. and from my trust I would elide your
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Outstanding write displaying reverence for the broken relationship and estranged lover. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
will not let my tongue evoke your name. You gone, I could not love me more than you and if you love me not at all I love me even less..... / Nicely articulated. Even a separation in a relationship has been respected.... with dignity for both- the lover and the beloved. Thanks.
A very heartfelt poem.A relationship may break, but can never vanish.There were reasons for loving and there are reasons for breaking.But a break hurts and your words nicely articulate your pain.