My love, you are not with me anymore,
You left me in your disdain,
Knowing you were my all,
And that this could’ve ended my life.
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what a devastating show of emotions right from the heart. Now you learned how to be in love and in despair at the same time. A nice one, keep it up...
very deep and so touching.This is a nice and great show of your emotions.
As with other works of yours, your depth of understanding seems beyond your years. Clear and concise, with laser-like precision.
Very hard lines...but a love is forever in your mind..keep writing so nice. I like to read you.
A very emoitonal write with your heart on your shirtsleve... Very touching and filled wiht much emoiton..... Bonnie
You taught me everything you could, And you left the most important lesson for the end, My love, you taught me what pain was like, And for that Is what I am right now.......emotionally hurt poetess dwells at lengththe treachery.. but still no remorse aand ends with'thank you'... beautiful write and desrve...10 read mine thank you, miss i miss you and how r u/