Monday, April 26, 2010

An Ending Comments

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The magic is gone
The song is done
I am as old as
the world is cold
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Bryan Riley
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Amrit Rathi 06 May 2010

Marvelous! I give 10. [My life runs before me and I, out of breath, am trying to catch it before it is spent Too cold Too dark Too empty Too late...]

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Michael Brock 26 April 2010

Fantastic poem, good flow and imagery, I enjoyed reading this very much, will read again and again. thanks for sharing Michael

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Salem, Massachusetts
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