An End Comments

cries, crisis, endless..................................... Full stop. Tis provoking thoughts to drown in.... aroha Dxx

Starts out with a beautiful picture and setting. A very pleasant rhyming of words. I have not read many of your poems yet, but of those I have, it seems you tease us with more to think about at the end.

Very nice sad sentimental poem!

You write mushy stuff? Never would have thought you had it in you, but I haven't read all your poems yet. So you do have a heart after all. I can see I have some really good competition here.

Beautiful but very sad write. There should have been someone. I enjoyed to read it very much. ~JD~

Enjoyed this one too. Well crafted.

Two thumbs up! A pleasure, as always

You have a wide range of pace and voice in your poems Herbert. This stands out for me. Very nice!

Beautiful And Touching.Loved this one.Thank you.