Monday, December 22, 2014

An End With No End Comments

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An end with no end
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More I desire the less it seems
Sought it in charms of beauty
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Akhtar Jawad 24 December 2014

Yes mental peace is inversely proportional to the desires. Desires increase, mental peace is decreased. Desires decrease mental peace is increased. Aphilosophic poem.............10

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Salini Nair 23 December 2014

thoughtful write.....really like it...

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Rajesh Thankappan 23 December 2014

f the mind can work like a cascading waterfall, both beautiful and grandeur, and yet without any self-conscious, then, I believe it can reach a state of ultimate bliss. I congratulate you for this thought provoking poem.

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Valsa George 23 December 2014

Highly philosophical, rich in wisdom and powerful in diction! Enjoyed much!

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Lyn Paul 22 December 2014

An excellent write Deepak. Full of incredible wisdom.

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