Saturday, October 13, 2007

An End To All Comments

Rating: 3.1

Every thing must have an end
How unfair we can not mend
For good things on earth why an end
Bad things on earth sure need an end
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Subbaraman N V
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Gita Ashok 09 June 2010

All our energy we need to spend To protect the good and bring an end to bad! D Day to bring an end to all Good to Heaven and bad to Hell And a day to resurrect the world to tall Grand message indeed the God to tell! Fantastic! This poem brought to my mind all the evils that we face today - corruption, terrorism et al.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2009

D Day to bring an end to all Good to Heaven and bad to Hell And a day to resurrect the world to tall Grand message indeed the God to tell! everything must have anend.. good or bad whoever has taken birth ahas end one day... it is age old simple theory.... i loved it.....10 read mine sun.sun n son

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with deep ideas.10

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Vinod Kumar 05 January 2009

Very good Message thanks a lot sir.Good 2009.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 October 2008

A very nice poem.

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Chitra - 04 September 2008

yes by re-establishing the lost connection with cosmic essence only then can we increase the quotient of goodness

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 September 2008

A good appeal.....to God. We have to chant HIS name unceasingly to mend the human ways....thank u for this wonderful piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 August 2008

this poem speaks out on a most important truth through beautiful lines...in style 10/10

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Roland Bastien 06 April 2008

I like the music into your verses

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Hannah Mcgill 18 December 2007

I love the message you put out there. I have always believed everything in your life will fade into something else, sooner or later the bad must end and unfortunately so must the good.

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Daffodil Decarie 29 October 2007

Yep... that's why I'd like to ask... is life a mere period of time to prepare to die?

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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