An End Before The Start Comments

again , , beautifully written

Romantic... True felt feelings... Poetry transports and this piece truly does the same... one going through this feels his soul out... a lonely soul standing in fizz and yearning for the past.. The Pain U have today is because of the happiness U had before... the flow is nice and the scene created is the best of its type... very mature indeed... The flow of thought and the softness of diction is matchless... Exquisite piece of poetry Jahan... Keep it up!

This actually made me cry! Just the fact that you went there knowing you would not meet up, but to remember her. No umbrella, cry as the rain cries with you! X x x x x x

Loneliness of waiting and the solitude , absence of infinite love! heartbreaking! ! ! ! !