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Why am I......? Emotions, thoughts and anger all synthesized in this question. A good write, Chandra........10.

Emotions filled-in... great composition penned in nice imagery.

you have beautifully presented the emotion- anger- in this write...thanks Chandra...10

10++ i like it very much

A very vivid imagery, almost surreal and puts into a special mood. Thanks for sharing! 10+ Best wishes. A.

definitely puts the reader in the introspective mode. wonderful

the fretting and fuming routine encounters...can they be helped?

Well Written...............keep it coming..................

Some grammar mistakes; however, other than that it's a fantastic write. Like Ravi A mentioned: 'a fine narrative poem.' I 100 % agree. I have nothing else to say, but I have to apauld the effort an work that you put into this poem. Keep up the good writing. take care, Jake

superb write..........introspective..........well done

A fine narrative poem. 'To accept defeat'- we need not accept defeat. What we need is a heart to accept happiness and sadness with equal equanimity. Life is a mixture. We can't correct the world but only ourselves. Everybody is in search of happiness and peace and that is why he looks at the nature to unload his heart. We are part of this nature and there is an inner urge to feel about the wavelength. This is a natural instinct. In most of the cases, it doesn't sustain even after the twilight is gone or the chirp of a bird is no more heard. Our inner battery requires constant recharge.

Such a classical yet overlooked accounting of how we get caught up in the tensions and triviality of life missing so many times the serenity and peace simply found by looking out the window or gazing at nature's beuaty

Good write With a deep Meaning Sweet reading

A deep and meaningful piece, wonderful to read, thanks for the share

A deep and meaningful piece, wonderful to read, thanks for the share

A realistic touch of the modern world.......we have invited all these things....a simple and energetic poem to realise.

Anger is like a wave that comes from the ocean and some just roll, while others break on shore.

yes...very true...anger really takes us for a ride...you have brought out the feeling very well and that's what we do we don't look into its face straight...great