Thursday, April 24, 2008

An Encounter With The Past... Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart stopped a beat
A deep breath to bring me back
You right in front of me within a few feet
No warning, not a clue …. The feeling of a heart attack
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Patricia Gale
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Geoff Warden 08 May 2008

Leaving me totally breathless without words, well done...

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James B. Earley 04 May 2008

Thanks for sharing a beautiful write! I had a similar experience...different result. Please read my poem 'My Son.' Thanks.

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Ernestine Northover 24 April 2008

I like it, I like it lots. Lovely write subtle and sensual. Delightful to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

the readers also share the shock, amazement, and delight with the smooth flow of your nice piece...yes the emotion do get revived when we encounter past....

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Broken Peaces 24 April 2008

A stunning write lovely lady grabbing the instance with your golden pen a kiss to your cheek for a poem well written 10 Chris

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'An encounter with the past' that can't return. Only the then emotions are always the same. For now...this story seems in progress. Very well written.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 April 2008

A Heart stopping moment indeed, The kiss and once more you breathe.. Andy 10

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