My heart stopped a beat
A deep breath to bring me back
You right in front of me within a few feet
No warning, not a clue …. The feeling of a heart attack
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Thanks for sharing a beautiful write! I had a similar experience...different result. Please read my poem 'My Son.' Thanks.
I like it, I like it lots. Lovely write subtle and sensual. Delightful to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
the readers also share the shock, amazement, and delight with the smooth flow of your nice piece...yes the emotion do get revived when we encounter past....
A stunning write lovely lady grabbing the instance with your golden pen a kiss to your cheek for a poem well written 10 Chris
'An encounter with the past' that can't return. Only the then emotions are always the same. For now...this story seems in progress. Very well written.
A Heart stopping moment indeed, The kiss and once more you breathe.. Andy 10
Leaving me totally breathless without words, well done...