Tuesday, July 5, 2016

An Encounter Comments

Rating: 3.5

Someone weep while i sleep
But i've gone too deep
Struggle but can't wake up
Even by screams of breaking cup
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Anne Yun
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Daniel Brick 21 September 2016

Sleep is meant to restore us and console us. In this poem you are willing to give up those advantages to help someone in need, you cannot enjoy your sleep when when someone else is hurting. I take the nightmares to be your empathetic suffering with this person. I am moved by this poem of compassion (that English word from the Latin means To suffer with someone.)

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Dimitrios Galanis 12 July 2016

An excellent scene of the deep true of ourself's worries.Kudos Anne!

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Ernest Makuakua 05 July 2016

That feeling of a nightmare not right its beautifully written thank you anne

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