I art waiting for the songbird to show it's grace
Perhaps with a song or mere presence
I come from long tired journeys I chase
The lapse of wrong leads to perseverance
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i am easily impressed by poems like this because of the language/choice of words that is being used. I am amazed on how you arrange and choose them... so, this is an art!
you amaze me with the composed style with which you write...keep up the good work
Your Enchanting Song is Beautiful. I cannot believe a young man could ever compose a group of words and turn them into The Prose of Heaven. You my Friend have this Gift. I am Honoured to share. Thank You and your Gift. I am raised to a higher level of understanding. By your contact with our Association of Minds. Kindest Regards Philip
nice lyric poem, keep writing