Friday, July 3, 2009

An Enchanting Song Comments

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I art waiting for the songbird to show it's grace
Perhaps with a song or mere presence
I come from long tired journeys I chase
The lapse of wrong leads to perseverance
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vittal vandavasu
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Marieta Maglas 08 March 2010

nice lyric poem, keep writing

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 March 2010

i am easily impressed by poems like this because of the language/choice of words that is being used. I am amazed on how you arrange and choose them... so, this is an art!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 October 2009

you amaze me with the composed style with which you write...keep up the good work

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Philip Winchester 05 October 2009

Your Enchanting Song is Beautiful. I cannot believe a young man could ever compose a group of words and turn them into The Prose of Heaven. You my Friend have this Gift. I am Honoured to share. Thank You and your Gift. I am raised to a higher level of understanding. By your contact with our Association of Minds. Kindest Regards Philip

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