An Empty Sky Comments

I love this poem! It is well writen and I enjoyed reading it.

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A nice poem beautifully composed. I like most the last two stanzas. Regarding second stanza I agree with 'Unwritten Soul'. An empty sky is not empty, it has much much to give like clarity, transparancy, space for clouds, letting rays of sun moon reach the earth, rainbow etc. Poetry is very nice.

very well explained. loved each line of it! 'So look at it differently and give the shape' my english teacher would have lined this as the topic line! ! keep up the good work.10 stars: D

Beautiful write :) for this comment i took few lines(a stanza) to share my opinion: 'Sky has nothing much to offer' -I feel it offer many, it's inspired me to be free...dont you? 'Many hollow ideas and to differ' -Hollow not mean lack, it provides a space for cloud to rain and rain as a bless...hollow is not empty, but air to breathe 'Vast empty horizon as over stretched empire' -It's how the sky be a universal country..no boundary all embraced as one sea 'Only blue color to be taken into account and admire' -Not only blue, it changed to different colors in different time and tell me it's like human different time different mood sometimes An empty sky is not empty, adored by me and full with something nicely I do like this poem though! _Unwritten Soul

Such a beautiful poem, really amazing!

Today 13.09 nice discriptive piece - i often watch the sky making faces in the clouds looking for where awnsers lye amongst the blue of day or twinkling stars. on An empty sky From Scott Ball Today 13.09