Friday, August 15, 2008

An Empty Shell Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart will no longer beats
Since it may not beat for her
She is my last hope for happiness
So it will be silent forever
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Tyrone Wingfield
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Obinna Eruchie 18 August 2009

And how void can one be without light within, if love is missing.

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awesome..... yup, you got talent.

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Chandra Ramsahoi 23 February 2009

I LIKE THIS POEM, BUT ITS HEARTBROKEN AND SAD, LIFE IS MADE UP OF HURTS AND PAIN ITS ALL IN THE PACKAGE. KEEP WRITING.

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Monique Jones 05 September 2008

ooooh Tyrone...... Another good poem just keeping righting from the heart and you shall go farther than you ever thought.....

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Evaughn Gray 15 August 2008

that about made me cry..baby it was wonderful.je'taime. ~Love Eva

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